Gotta say it was rather amusing :P
Thought at first it was gonna be the usual genderswap joke, but was neat that it wasn't. That said though: What is different on this compared to the "sfw" version? Since I'm not seeing any difference between the two.
Smoothly animated, nice sound effects and all that. And had a funny punchline.
Gotta say: I expected the chest to be a mimic, but the axe was kinda more hilarious xP
Was pretty okay. Didn't quite have a punch like most of these are supposed to have. But managed to be somewhat amusing at least. Also: Tons of people were doing these before Zone even posted the first one.
And well, seeing how a guesstimated ~95 % of all of those thousand scenarios would be identical, that kinda makes it a lot less impressive xP
Still, animation was totally acceptable. Very nicely executed expressions tbh.
Loops overall really fluidly. Sounds easily get repetitive, but they're at least not very annoying. So that's a big plus.
And that is one cum-pump heavy dildo xD
Impressive physics tbh. And you're finally catching on what a "loop" is xP
And character wise, gotta say they look very average. Lot less things going on with their hair than an actual FF character but x3
It's pretty good tbh. A few things: With how you're using mask layers on the penis, it kida makes it look like it doesn't move at all... which it kinda doesn't xP But with the big thrust he does, it should penetrated notably. Really nice job on the mouth though.
I can say one thing: avoid the double framing. Have it go back to loop on the second last frame. Currently you have that slight glitch where it shows the same frame twice.
Oh, and look up tween easing if you are using that. You want it to move at slightly different speed throughout. I'm not sure if it does that atm. But I usually go with a slight "S" shaped curve. (with the "S" on the side)
Yeah, I noticed one of the poses peepee wasn't matching physics. I will fix that. I'm using CS3, so the special tweening features are absent, unless I'm not understanding the "S" motion.
Thank you! If you don't mind I will put your username in the thank you credits once I update this file.
It's a bit rickety. But otherwise loops pretty ok. Had more scenes than I expected :P
Did really like the small details like the reach around in one of the scenes.
You should probably mention that it includes hyper genderswaps btw. (I know they can shapeshift, that still doesn't sweep the fact under the rug xD)
Also: Do know I rate stuff based on the actual 1-10 scale. Where a 2,5 means it's "completely average+ok." So my score for this is "A bit below average, but still pretty good.". I do like a lot of parts in it. It's just a bit unpolished. But keep up the work. You are getting there ^^
And could really do with some description in the author comments of what it contains. Like, I thought it might have contained something lesbian based on the fandom and title, but turns out it didn't :P
There are a few notable hiccups in the animation. Nothing too major, but easy to spot if you look for them. I'm not too high on 3d, so might not be the easiest to smooth out.
Anyhow, that aside, pretty standard one-sided psudo-hyper porn. Uses the stock sound effects and all that. Least picked some of the better ones.
That pelvis+pussy needs to be looked over though... at least with how you placed them. But yeah, pretty okay otherwise.
Sounds effects are a pain to come by tbh. The ones you got are pretty okay though.
Anyhow, it does loop really nice. Even got some labia motion in there. You should have the side of the girl's mons move a little to though. The rest of the vulva is a bit static.
The dude moves nicely as well. (Really wouldn't mind seeing that character as a chick for once. And/or with a horsecunt, maybe hyper xD It's always as a hyper dude with tits xP)
Anyhow, loop wise as a whole: You should aim to give them a bit softer transition. If you animate with flash: Try checking out the tween easing tool. Right now it's a bit "point A to point B".
It's pretty okay. Kinda 3 in one ordeal.
The faces are a bit odd, and the sounds are a bit stale. The music got a really nice tone to it though :3
Really quirk a brow on what the "scene selection" is meant to be but xD
It does have some questionable anatomy at some parts. But all and all, it's perfectly decent.
Kinda does the usual, but not more than that I'm afraid.
It was quite amusing. Didn't entirely see the ending coming, despite the title tbh heh.
Still, was well made overall. Felt slightly rushed/forced at some parts though. And hum, much more blatant nudity than the other ones.
And ah... yet another female portrayed flat as a brick downstairs xP
Least there were some pubes, and correct flesh color though.
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