Again, it's still kinda disjointed, and sorta swaps theme in between each "episode". Like it's not sure what it wants to be. It feels like there could be something here, just not sure what it's trying to be :P
It's both a good and a bad thing. Want to see where this goes. But think that it so far has been very... split, so to speak, in what it's doing.
Here was my idea: CM is traumatized after being raped and everything goes shitty for her. She then meets Lina (who saves her) which appears to be as a "friend" but later they gradually develop feelings and it becomes more intimate (kind of developing into a semi-porn-hybrid). But the CM's main objective is to find Pudge and to kill him. As you already seen in Episode two, they are talking about upgrading their items to kill Pudge. But to get TO Pudge, there will be lots of obsticles, like Dirge (which you see in episode 3) and probably noob-Clinkz who just keeps appearing all the time like a rat. It is sort of a dramatic love story of approximately 7 episodes. Imagine DotA from the player's point of view - it's usually just a mechanical game without any feelings with a sole purpose of winning. Now imagine that the camera (from the player's sort of view) zooms INTO the world of DotA which becomes alive. The heroes become characters with personalities and each of them have their own agena (CM wants to get revenge, Lina wants to kill heroes and seduce CM plus she wants to help CM, Pudge is just hungry for meat, Dirge is a badass "Terminator" who just kill all the living, Clinkz is just a nitwit who tries to steal kills, Dragon Knighs just keeps farming to become strong and polish his own ego).
All of these agendas will be gradually revealed throughout the story. This mini-season of Heroes of Dota is about one game of Dota2: both teams are trying to win, ofcourse. My intention was to add a deeper level to this series - not just your corny Dota2 parodies, but I guess it's harder than I thought it would be. For the series to convey its deeper meaning, I gotta release many more episodes which are longer - with more dialogues, etc.
As I wrote in my reply of HoD_001 - there are all of these aspects that you constantly need to be aware of - even in the structure of the story. And you need to prioritize that. If I include too much story, I have to sacrifice the actions/comedy/? scenes - but it will add this meta level to it. So, I don't regret anything that I have created so far. Rather than not attempting at all, I am constantly making "mistakes" (even that is hard to define in the world of art) and learning from them. HoD is my experiment - I made the episodes very impulsively without overthinking too much.
Right now I feel like taking a long break from it and eventually get back to it, if there will be demand for it or if I feel like it. My goal was to pause HoD Season 1 and make a pilot to HoD Season 2 which will have a completely different story (very very different). In season 2 the main focus is on the players and their rage towards each other. It will be action comedy with lots of player conversations. Hint: "From Russia with Flame"
Well, as said, even if rather disjointed, it seems to follow a sort of story or, concept at least.
Still not really sure where it's trying to go or do. But the style is kinda neat tbh. Reminiscent of south park, but still with it's own twist to it. But yeah, as said, it's had a rather weird delivery so far.
Eh, tbh, they were rather weak. Almost all were quite forced. One just seemed like it was just the same as the original. And one was amusing. But that's it.
But yeah... overall it felt mostly like a waste of time. It was a good style adaptation. But nothing really aside that. Really not any A material that's for sure. I recently watched through the entire Teen Titans show, and I found a lot more amusing out of context dialog than some shoehorned cumshot joke.
Try doing a little more norm breaking. I know you're prolly putting close to all focus on Skullgirls, going with how bland the latest flash was. But you ought to learn how to juggle the two.
Imo, it'd be better to wait between each release than to get a rushed one. Ah well. Will still be interesting to see what you do next at least. Perhaps you'll finally go all the way with trying something new heh :P
Kind of amusing, rather simple design, but it worked well :P
Random tmi but: A friend of mine did a similar cover of this song, but for my vulva xD
Have to say it rather lacked any punchline or purpose tbh... like, had some kinda decent set-up, but then failed to go anywhere.
A little slow/disjointed start, but it could be interesting. Would have to see where it goes.
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A tad bit too slow, but was a little amusing at least. But yeah, could do with some polish. Decent start though.
Quite amusing. Though, seriously, dat expression at the slap xD
Can say your works quite amusing overall :P
Could do with a bit more cunt jokes though imo.
Hm... kinda so-so on what to think of this atm. It seems pretty semi-standard sci-fi, anime-ish wise. But that said, many thing are that now a days. But yeah, so far, it's a little slow and not too notable. But I think it could pick up some speed perhaps. It's definitely decently done at least.
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