You're at 3.0, and STILL haven't added a climax function for Zelda?
I mean, it's kinda ok that she only has genitalia design for female and genderswapped. But it is really lazy how you made one micro and the other hyper, atop not bothering to add a climax for one of them.
Other than that though, it is rather solid. The cum effect is really good.
Hm... the dress up itself seems solid enough. But, no idea what you did, but you should have looked over the "preview" part. I tried in both firefox and chrome, but the UI is all kinds of fucked up.
You click and hold to have it scroll, and like, it seems like ALL the clothes are out of the screen. Several buttons seem to not do anything. And as her eyes are moving, could kinda have needed some soft breathing and/or other movement.
It's a decent preview. But currently there's A LOT of things you gotta work out with it. Most of them are UI wise.
Gotta say: Hottie kinda suddenly changed appearance when they turned into "sex mode" xP
And hm... really expected a tad bit more from her endowment wise. Rather lackluster for being one of the more notable ones x3
Anyhow, the PoV choices to show the action are really nice. And the penetration and stroking animation are really well done. (the penetration however could really have done with one more frame... her perineum really oddly flexes in and out of glistening xP)
Will say that she looks a tad bit too disinterested in it. Like, her hand shows enthusiasm.
But her face kinda gives me "deadpan office worker", if that makes sense.
Like, the dialog and face just doesn't add up, at all.
Gotta say though: REALLY impressive cumshot... also REALLY inexplicable how they got into that pose before the cumshot but... xD
Though, really feels like he should have needed some kind of build up, or needing to earn the reward there. And forgot for a moment how hyper he is xD Even another reason that makes Hottie look a bit like stale bread in comparison xP
Eh, as said before: Just find it a bit "~eh" over the massive clash between the genders of the demons. But it's really complex to debate in that area. There's just a lot of good mixed with bad.
Still, aside from the intro, the sound and music are really neat in it.
That said, that could easily be fixed with more characters. But as of now it's very skewed xP
You can possibly btw give some teaser hint to what the exclusive scenes are. Icon wise. Currently very "in the dark, dice roll". Still, overall, this project looks like it can be a lot of fun. I do hope it manages to break the mold of porn tropes and all that. Or at least has 1 character on either side that does it. Just as long as everyone isn't just a re-skin of each other hehe x3
But yeah, I do hope you include some interesting stuff with Hottie, or some other chick. As currently it's all about the hyper dick, and the girls literally bending over backwards to please the guy xD (I know that's kinda the primary focus. But it comes off as a little lame how the stronger has to submit to the weaker, because reasons xP)
thank you for the detailed review and positive rating. Much appreciated. We have read it carefully and find a lot of the points you have made to be valid ones. Some things we actually intended to include but couldn't (ex. face expressions), others we simply agree and understand you point of view (ex. how did she get in that position) and others still are being planned (ex. girl on girl action).
Thank you for taking the time to give us your feedback and have a great day ;)
Well, looking it over, I can only really say that, most the stuff has been mentioned by bellow comment. Though, unlike them, I did kind of assume that generic dude #48 was merely there for the demo. So I was just expecting that there'd be some actual choices in that once it's more complete. Though, can say I would have preferred if at least the two playable genders: Dude and chick had at least been implemented. But guess I can see the idea of just going with the dude. If only to gauge interest.
Anyhow, that aside: It does seem like a very interesting concept. But with a HEAVY emphasis on the "concept" part. As like with games such as Crowjob, Fatelogic's [whatever their elf game was called}, No Vacancy, HTH, Meet and fuck, basically anything from Vortex00 and TONS other games have had massive trainwrecks with. It's not just to shoehorn in all kinds of things and just hope it works. (or utterly neglect/leave things out for that matter.)
I am a little skeptical in that this seems like it very likely might be a bit too ambitious. Feels like it might become "micromanage, the game". As a game should preferably be fun and/or interesting. Currently feels like there's a tad bit much back and forth in order to do much about anything.
Currently it's a bit mixed to make out anything really. Giving it a slightly below average rating as of yet. As, this can really go either way. Still, the graphics in it are really impressive.
Personally the most worried about it doing a massive flop in terms of female anatomy. As, like this fandom has proven (all of the 18+ ones) it's considered totally fine to be utterly incompetent at female genital anatomy. As evident by the ~90+ % fuck up rate of all artists when it comes to the pussy. I mean, when the average person doesn't have a standard for vags, and recommended tip for anatomy is "Eh, just slap a slit somewhere between the anus and navel" or "just cover it up by a hyper dick"... it's not that much of a difference in quality xP I mean, when the animation legend Zone themselves admits to being basically unable to draw anything aside from the 1 vag they know, or do it in any amount of higher quality. It's not hard to understand why they've made the claim that "Being attracted to women is a niche fetish.". Like... merely glancing over at the cock obsessed establishment and the futa fanatics... yeah, no. Pussy is not even on the top 10 list of what guys wana see in their porn xD
Regardless, if this actually manages to pull off some proper pussy, that would be really cool tbh. Kinda never been done before as said. So yeah, would be awesome with a game that'd actually have a female PC, that you could play as. I am still very uncertain how this will turn out, but guess we can only wait and see really.
It is a bit loud voice wise, (and doesn't sync at all) and the sound effects are over the top but that aside, the music is at least at a nice volume heh.
And why is literally anything with a "supported by shadbase" centered around some dude's dick? xD (seriously, can a single person on that site draw a proper pussy? xD Or know more than one design?)
At least this one doesn't pull a"psyche!" by pretending to be a canon character they just genderswapped. But still slightly vague on informing on that haha.
Anyhow, surprisingly good hair effect. Vag's rather cookie cutter. (Not flat, but not far from it) And penis doesn't really follow with the body.
Kinda random increase in flesh detail during the cum scenes... the expressions are really well made and detailed. But many of them are kinda, out of place scene wise.
Still, that aside: Very top notch graphic in most of it.
Makes me a bit curious in case you can do stuff with the chick in focus... but that seems to be something less than 10 % of porn artists are able to do.
Heck, recently found out not even Zone can handle that. Atop that they're incompetent at female genitalia. (And, apparently thinks that being attracted to females is a "niche fetish" xD)
Can say, it was kinda interesting.
Was really nice to see some sorta decent variation on the pussy designs. Most just go with full loli vags as they cba to learn how to draw female anatomy xP
Will say though: Really dissapointed that it had no alien pussy, but primarily: It had no female orgasms. Feels a bit shoddy that literally every single female had no needs or self-regard.
Other than that, was pretty good. Standard "dude with somewhat oversized dick" PC and all that. Did have some quite interesting story as well.
I'm glad that you are able to appreciate the amount of work I put in the characters! The cityhunters are mostly givers yes. You'll see some alien pussy in the future installments. Thanks for watching the stuff!
Yeah, would have to agree that this is more of an interactive slideshow.
The menu is really well made. But it's not really needed. As you kinda always just click travel, talk, travel, talk, repeat. So the "gameplay" is a bit shoehorned tbh.
Doesn't overly help that the "PC" is a classic "no needs or self-regard" female and only does the bidding of some dicks xP And a little lame that all the girls got identical loli vags. So not much going on there. Nor really any replay value.
The art is kinda okay imo. But it's rather lackluster. You prolly could just have drawn a few nudes and gotten the same results more or less for less effort.
Still, decent attempt. You could prolly go with doing a bit more outside of arche and stereotypes :P Most your stuff is really "one trick pony". If that's your aim, then alright :3 Otherwise: Might be an idea to look into that a bit. Possibly tinker some with female rapists, and/or more genital designs. It is a bit stale imo. But that said: TONS of people love that. Especially as they can't handle change xD But yeah, just trying to get an estimate on your aim here :P
Can say it's a bit rickety, or whatever the term is.
Has a number of twitchy loops. Primarily with the eyes. And it double-frame loops. You should look into not having double-frames. It makes the animation flow a lot smoother. Basically, if you have a say, 1-10 frame animation, have it repeat 1-9 instead. And: change the tween easing. You want it to sorta have a "/" motion, except more diagonal. Gives it a much less stale approach.
Not sure how much sense that made. But I hope it made some at least ^^'
Anyhow: Like said below a bit: It seem a bit badly structured. The game is incredibly generic in the set up. Kinda "porn game #852" I can say it's nice that you didn't go for a loli vag, like most lazy/incompetent hacks that fills this fandom. But, the game doesn't really do much, so to speak.
It's a classic OOC canon female character that has nothing to do with their canon counterpart, apart their looks. Which, can even be changed. So, not that it really matters. And it has some Gary Stu, faceless buff male with a weird dick. This series does have a "thing" at least. With the whole "magic impregnation". So it is not just another cookie cutter porn game. But aside from that, it doesn't really do much, if you know what I mean? It's decent, mediocre porn.
Like the person below got into a bit: You kinda leave people with a completely run of the mill porn game, (that used to) lack an ending. I totally get wanting to get something from what you do. But when the internet literally is flooded with stuff similar to this, that IS finished AND free. That's REALLY hard to compete with. I know some animator, can't recall their name, totally flopped on that. As they were making, below average porn loops. Promising to start making above average finished products as soon as they got x amount of patreons.
When making porn today. You kinda either need to be exceptionally good at it. Provide some sort of porn niche that isn't catered too. (like your magical impregnation) You could prolly skip a lot of the dialog though, just focus on the porn. Since most of what I've read; just spam through it anyhow. Though, the other half of people seem to enjoy just how stupid it is xP So I can't' say which is better... might could include a "no bs mode". Anyhow, it's kinda one or the other of what I've seen from my ~15 years within the business. Or well, you can also always churn out half-assed hyper futa. That stuff always seems to sell. Even if you lie about it, and deliver 0 futa like Kevinsano. Or rehash and re-use the same loops with different models like Blackguyjr... kinda odd how much you can get away with when it comes to cock obsessed futa-fanatics xD They're so gullible.
Anyhow, trailed off a bit. But yeah, try to figure out what to focus on, and how to deliver it. Just remember: the average porn viewing dude is generally among the most spoiled bratz you can cater to xP They expect a TON of high quality stuff for free. Due to how the market has developed over the years.
For double-frame tips and motion, good to know. People never mention that kind of stuff.
For loli vag, I don't know what you mean. (but I'll figure it out at some point surely)
For all the rest, it seems you don't have the slightest idea of what hentai reality is (or just plain reality : you play a finished free game, and criticize it's not finished and free : ..., WTF, lol ?!), and it always has been a NG thing to crush down hentai creators and make them go away from this site, so I won't hold you to it. ;)
Though don't expect much from me when you are considering most players to be plain morons.
I do games for people, because they are nice and I like them. You despise people. Dialogue ends there. Open your mind, and maybe I'll open my (virtual) ears.
Hm... instantly got skeptical when I saw Shad was involved in some way.
Always instantly drops the quality of any female anatomy xD
I had actually seen the secret button animation before, and it was overall rather neat.
As for the main animation, was really dissapointed that it was just stuck full with genderswaps... they're at least not hyper as well I guess... but yeah, really bland cop-out.
Could have done something interesting with them.
Hm, Raven's shoulder seems a bit disjointed on a side note.
That aside, it does for the most part have really good expressions. And the sounds are pretty good as well. And gotta say: The dudes dicks move kinda weird in some of the scenes. Especially their balls.
Still, overall a let down with quite impressive detail in it. I am impressed by the effort put into it.
It just has very lacking creativity in the female aspects. And just very "eh" in how all Ravens aspects are genderswapped. Making her vag seem even lazier with how some of the dudes got different dick designs. Still, the little Easter egg keeps the score up a bit higher.
Hm, gotta say: The music loops a bit soso.
Controls are kinda okay, but it feels rather backwards that you have no attack, nor can jump over enemies.
Not sure either if the spelling of certain things is intentional but... it feels a bit cobbled together. Especially with how cookie cutter it is. The movement is kinda clunky tbh, somewhat unresponive and the hitboxes aren't the best. I do really like that she does a little jump when at an edge. But that's kind of about it tbh. It's just really mediocre in most other regards.
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