At first reveal, I will admit I deadpanned and rolled my eyes when every one of the females had loli vags. It turned out that there was effort put into them after all. But that said, still really lame how all of them were just identical.
But that aside; It was a fun concept. Overall really well made. Had a bit of the issue of "just going on". As it kinda have no destination or high-points. But, it did work really well for just cycling through characters. Even if extremely one sided, trope heavy. Though, most of which could be explained with it being a fantasy simulation :P
So yeah, it's really impressive as a whole. But still has quite the few eyebrow quirk moment. It is neat that it does branch out near the end. But I can't help but feel as if something more interesting could have been done with it... as it was just very "rinse and repeat". But yeah, well made, just feels like it, perhaps wasn't missing something, but that it could have had more oomph.
Looks pretty decent. How come she got a Caucasian pussy though? Especially with that dick, I kinda expected a different design.
Still, pretty decently detailed. It's at least small and not just flat.
Could be something interesting. Question though: Can you only make the dudes cum? Or can you actually get her off? And/or is there also other females you can pair them with?
Gotta say, it has a nice style to it. Flows rather well too. Some motions are a bit rickety though.
Bit bland in how it has the generic hyper dick, and loli vag. But kinda everyone demands those now a days.
That aside, a bit curious: Will it be the classic male exclusive climax? Or will you actually have one for the chick as well?
loli vag lol xD.
I want to make one climax for her, but for girl is a bit more hard to make, but i'll do my best to put at least one xD.
Lets see, taking a closer look at this one...
The models look really good tbh. Nice, flowing scenes as well.
Okay sound too. That's usually hard to come by. Heck, the female model even got depth :P
This IS a shadbase thing though, and those are kinda known for shoddy quality in the female department... so will see if it manages to circumvent that.
It does have a bit of a too sudden transition tbh... (several scenes seem to lack something to lead it there. Which is even more notable as how certain scenes has way many transitional periods in them.) but its theme as a whole is impressive so far.
It has heavy tropes in it. But, can wait and see how it handles all of them before I base anything on it. The cum scene was a little underfunded, or how to put it.
(Again, with how certain scenes transition, it makes it look cheap. Due to how deep other scenes are.)
And, it does seem like it does nothing but follow the archetypical porn tropes. Much like the one trick pony shadbase is. Which, tbh: Does cause a slight conflict. As, it seems like there'd be more to it. But, it just being a run of the mill cookie cutter... does leave a lot to ask for.
It at least have very minimal clipping. (but, where it does clip, it IS notable) And very nice texture overall.
Hm... really disappoint how haphazard the pussy was compared to the penis. Not to mention how extremely low budget the anuses were. Which tbh... was really surprising. Even if everyone in the Shadbase is notoriously known for all being utterly incompetent at female genital anatomy, buttholes are kind of one of the "things" in shadbase.
Oh well, the perineum is at least placed correctly. And as said: The sounds are surprisingly good.
Does have some semi-out of place scenes, that feels like they could really have been explored further to add variety to it.
It sadly wraps up as any other: One sided pleasure wise, and no climax scene for the female.
It has a theme that doesn't work out/match in the end, but feels like it would have been a lot better if it followed... it has a lot of "could have been great.", but it feels like corners were cut simply to fit in to the status quo. I know they say you can't teach an old dog new tricks. But tbh, it feels like there could be something far more interesting here. Possibly if it broke from the restrictive chains of the shadbase. As, enforcing archetypes and rehashing the same 3 porn acts doesn't feel like the best use of time for this style.
But yeah, overall, really well made. Just a bit lacking.
You're at 3.0, and STILL haven't added a climax function for Zelda?
I mean, it's kinda ok that she only has genitalia design for female and genderswapped. But it is really lazy how you made one micro and the other hyper, atop not bothering to add a climax for one of them.
Other than that though, it is rather solid. The cum effect is really good.
Hm... the dress up itself seems solid enough. But, no idea what you did, but you should have looked over the "preview" part. I tried in both firefox and chrome, but the UI is all kinds of fucked up.
You click and hold to have it scroll, and like, it seems like ALL the clothes are out of the screen. Several buttons seem to not do anything. And as her eyes are moving, could kinda have needed some soft breathing and/or other movement.
It's a decent preview. But currently there's A LOT of things you gotta work out with it. Most of them are UI wise.
I wouldn't say "late" as well, honestly it's not like I expected to find people in the same day or anything xP
I reckon I'd have to look for a few weeks at least :P So no worries about being "late" ;3
Still gotta find a Summers, but I'll mention who gets the part once I have all the VA's I need.
Can say you really captured the "feel" of the show hehe. Really neatly made demo imo :3
Will still look through the rest of the VA's. And still need a Summers, so we'll have to wait and see until then~
But yeah, really like your... enthusiasm? Would that be the correct term?
Thanks for the positive response. I had a lot of fun coming up with the lines for this demo.
Yeah, like said above: Really great Morty in this. Got his overall tone down really well.
I'll get back to you in case I get a hold of a Summers VA as well :3
So, bit curious: Can you only draw hyper dudes? Or are you able to draw pussies as well?
Might have asked you before. But looking over the gallery, it's pretty clear you can do one, but not the other. As, it's more than a little one sided heh.
Earl eh? Not really what I picture a unicorn name, but eh, Guess it kinda works.
Heh, it's like I said: People DEMAND that you draw horsedick xD Or you're not a "real" porn maker xP
It's still hilarious to see people freak out over anything that isn't a loli vag x3 Ah, still remember the dozens of people having a panic attack when someone attached horse genitals on a female centaur xD
You'd think they'd be able to puzzle that out. But apparently even that's too hard. Which again: Is amusing to people that see no logical issues with a character spontaneously getting a hyper dick.
I am late night rambling here, my bad. But yeah.. the R34 fandom is very "srsly?" a lot of the time.
Glad to hear it sounds like the project went mostly well :P
Hope my help with the project was well, mostly helpful xD
And allright, good luck with your work in the future~
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